I told myself I wasn't going to do this, but...I'm a sucker for any kind of feedback.
This is the groovy 'blurb' someone on NaNoWriMo wrote for me when I told them the plot of my novel.
At eighteen, Elizabeth ventured from her home in England to work as a hotel waitress in France. The visit was supposed to be short, that is, until the hotel's entertainment cancelled and she took the stage with her co-worker, Tobias, to sing a duet while he played the piano. Their immediate connection lead to romance, but Tobias had a history he wasn't keen on talking about. It was hard enough getting Tobias to open to her, but difficult still, when she found out she was pregnant.
...yeah, it sounds like a Mills and Boon, doesn't it? There is more to it than this, I swear.
Here's something cute, because it's now Monday. D:
I've also come to the conclusion that nobody besides me particularly cares about the plot. I know I can't force it on people, but it feels sometimes like it's my 'secret' and do I want it to stay secret or not?
Blame this on my reading Rousseau. It's the first philosophical book I've ever read apart from Sophie's World (which I have not finished), and even though my attention drifts sometimes it drifts in a very cerebral and moony kind of direction - "How does Anna Karenina become so meaningful when the core story could be from a soap opera?" rather than "I can't wait to watch Glee again."
How did he cope with being alone for two years? I'd drive myself insane in a month. Then again maybe he was a bit loopy. He tells an interesting story about one time a Great Dane pounced on him and the resulting blow to the head on the pavement knocked him out for a few hours. Waking up, he says, was one of the best moments of his life, because he momentarily forgot absolutely everything and felt like he was being born again. So he ambles home in this good mood, and is then surprised when his wife freaks out, because, oh yeah, he's injured everywhere. Whatcha gonna do, eh?
This picture made my night!

That's
I think I will insist that we have the heating on for more than 15 minutes a day. Part of my brain says "Think of the money! You'll need money when you go to France!" but another part of me thinks this sucks, and I really can't concentrate on anything if all I can think of is "I AM COLD".
Anyway, needed to get that out of my system. On with something more fun.
( SPOILERS AHOY for Being Human )
Next GLEE:
( My thoughts on Glee,,, )
If you would like birthday fic, R/T or otherwise, leave a prompt in the comments! :D
( Moony's Speciality )
I've had some lovely presents, including:
- A copy of 'The Time Traveler's Wife', which I asked for, so YAY!
- A copy of 'New Moon'. I haven't read 'Twilight' but I'm seeing the film tomorrow. My closest friends mock Twilight to death, but my dad was all 'I saw this and knew I had to get it for you' so I'm conflicted.
- A voice recorder
- A gift voucher with which I bought a CD which says it will teach me 31 languages. Well, 28, since I already know three of them. :)
- DVDs of Pride and Prejudice, the TV version with Colin Firth. Mmm.
- More!
All in all, a fabulous Christmas.
Without further ado, here is the unbeta'd eighth chapter of 'Blood on the Moon'. I'm trying so hard not to let this story die!
( Chapter Eight!! )
My Christmas Eve has been wonderful, watching some favourites on the television; The Snowman (if you have never seen it, I strongly recommend it), Belle's Enchanted Christmas (I've never actually seen that, it was quite odd at first, like reading a Beauty and the Beast fanfic or something), Corpse Bride (not Christmassy, but I love it so) and now The Muppets Christmas Carol.
Most of my preparations are fine, though there was one little fanfic I wanted to write. Would you all be willing to read Christmas fic a few days late? :)
Merry Christmas my lovely f-list!! :D Hope you have the best days ever.
I will no doubt be posting tomorrow, about Doctor Who if nothing else. :)
Part One of the two-part Corpse Bride/Pushing Daises crossover, featuring the cast of Corpse Bride! I couldn't think of an appopriate title, so for now it's called...
( Dead Girl, You Are Beautiful (Part One) )
I'm going to watch 'Glee' soon. It looks like the corniest, silliest show in the world, but I'm excited.
I feel soooo good right now!
54, 501 words baby! Yeah! Pretty mediocre words even Mills & Boon wouldn't want, but still! I've never written anything so long!
Now I will hopefully go to bed at a sensible hour for the first time in a few weeks.
I have decided that I WILL do it even if I have to deprive myself of two days of sleep (hey, I did it on the way back from Corfu...) but still, it is slightly terrifying. It doesn't help that everyone I know doing it has either given up or decided to 'take it slowly', except for
If anyone is interested, here is the extract I have posted on the NaNo site. And yes, it does have a Harry Potter reference
A/N: Bear in mind this is set in 2002, before even OotP has come out.
( and here's the jump )
- Mood:
creative
I'm almost disappointed that most of you are American and won't be so able to share the nostalgic cartoon love so much...
( Cut for spoilers and squeeing )
My novel's word count isn't too impressive, but it is going well. I'm being a good girl and doing all my uni work before I give myself time to write. Sad eh?
I haven't got an exact plan but I'm coming up with ideas as I go, which is really helping me to get to know the characters better. I can see my own flaws and how stupid they are, but that's what December's editing will be for.
I am so determined to do this, the sensible part of me is quite worried about it. I don't care if my head falls off. It will be done!!
I will also be very tempted, I know, to post it all on here when I'm done, just so you can all rip it apart, though hopefully add "I thought X was cute though."
There's a deleted scene from HBP on Youtube!
I like the tone of this, and the focus on Snape with the choir going on the background really got me thinking about the whole sacrifice/redemption themes he's going to be a part of. That, and I love the way Ron and Hermione look up like that, just as they do on the US cover art!
However, I can see why they deleted this. It didn't really add much to the story. If only Alfonso Cuaron had followed the same logic and deleted *let's have a random look at the lake* scene.
I have a week off next week that I can't wait for. I'm going to live like a real writer and write all the time! I do have to read a couple of books and things though.
Sorry to yammer on pointlessly. Here's something you might like. As all MWPP fans know, a staple of Marauder era humour fic is Sirius flirting with McGonagall. This is how she responds. Bonus cameos from James, Remus and Lily. I didn't make this, I might add. I wish.
- Mood:
cranky
I think I must be insane.
But at least I have a plot! :)
